Snowing day
1. Do you like snow is covering the land and
buildings?
2. Can you see how many people are walking
on the street in this picture?
3. Do you think people can walk on the
snowfield easily?
This class was proceeding in a
friendly and joyful atmosphere
1. 20 students in this classroom are doing
different things such as playing together, drawing some pictures on the black
board, eating and embracing each other.
2. Teacher is very friendly to treat a
student.
3. There are three students sitting in front
of computer to talk and study.
4. Only one student is carrying her bag,
and she is probably leaving this classroom.
5. Two students are playing doll in the
corridor of classroom.
Translation is still a barrier to your writing, Judy. There is no 'snowfield'in picture 1, only 'snow' (as this is the city and there is no field).
ReplyDeleteQ1 does not need the verb 'is' as you have 'like'.
Statement 2 is missing an article 'the' for teacher, and is strange in form. A better statement would be 'The teacher is very friendly with the students.'. Statement3 is missing an article and the tense is wrong. It should read: 'There are three students sittingin front of a computer talking and studying.'. Statement 5 should read 'Two students are playing with a doll in the aisle.'